Thursday, March 12, 2009

I need a help with my essay, i need some ideas?

Our community received a large grant . Two proposals have been made . one is to have after school program . the other is to have adult how to read program .which one is your choice wil help with the people in the community?


Can you guys help figure out some ideas about writing this essay , i do really want some supporting details, and expand them a little bit , i need some hints . thanx!!!



This is a very difficult choice.





If you have an after school program, you will provide a place for latch key children to go, children whose parents are still working when they get home from school. It would (I hope) be a safe environment and give chances to play and get study help.





On the other hand, an adult literacy program can also give great benefits. Those people can then get better jobs (or get a job in the first place). The better job and the literacy will allow them to then get further education, maybe a GED, maybe go on to a community college for professional training and more. All of those things benefit the person, the person's family, and the community. It takes that person off welfare roles, or at least increase the chances. Finally, if this person becomes educated and able, he or she has a chance of helping his or her own children to become educated. It starts a positive cycle rather than a negative cycle.





I hope these at least clarifies the advantages. Each can be a good choice.




I'm thinking the after school problem will be better. Instead of kids fighting, doing drugs, or getting involve in no good behaviours, the after school program will help prevent it. Now there's way too many drop-outs, and young violence, and it's not the kids fault. They just need help, support, and motivation. Especially if the after school program will help kids academically, then I think it's a must. It also provide employment opportunities to other people in the community


that wants to help. Why not do both? After school program during the day, at night will be a program for aiding adults on bow to read.




After school program deffo.. children nowadays don't have things to do, it could be educational and also benefit there social skills, effective communication etc and give them confidence boosters :) xx

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